Sunday, February 19, 2012

Crystal Friday Fantasy V

I will keep the introduction short, something happened to crystal just before she kisses Jeremy.



There was a shatter of glass, then there was nothing.
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Jeremy: I didn't know what I should do, but, it just felt... Natural. I put my hand on her neck and the other on her back and leaned in to kiss her. There was a boom. His living room window shattered. He felt Crystal shudder against him, then slump to the floor in a heap. What the f***?? "Crystal? Are you okay?" he bent down to pick her up, then he saw a small trickle of blood coming from her back. "Crystal!" he turned her over and saw a small hole, right where her heart should be. "Crystal!" he was hysterical now. "No, no, NO! Don't die on me! Crystal, please! Don't leave me! Crystal! Can you hear me!" he had started to cry. He didn't know what to do. He got up off the floor, that was now covered in Crystals blood, and looked for a phone. He finally found one and called 911.
"911 wh-" he cut them off.
"Please help! My... Girlfriend was shot!"
"Okay sir, your going t-" he cut them off again.
"Just get a f****** ambulance here to help her! Shes going to end up dying if you don't!" he was furious now. Why didn't they understand that Crystal, his Crystal, was going to die. He gave them his address and hung up the phone, fed up with their arrogance. He went back to Crystal and tried to stop the bleeding. There was so much blood on the floor now. She must be dead by now. One person can't hold that much blood. They took what seemed like an eternity to get there. They loaded her into the ambulance and tried to shut him out. "H*** no. Im coming with her." they decided not to argue considering the patient, and let him in. They gave her I.v.'s and lots of blood, and talked about stuff that he would never be able to understand. At one point, her heart stopped. He jumped out of his seat and started yelling at them. "Why are you so useless! I'm surprised she's still alive even! You guys took long enough! Fix her! Fix my Crystal!" he didn't think she would mind being called that. He was going to say that she was his for as long as he could. We finally got to the hospital and they took her to the e.r. They wouldn't let him come with her this time. They made him wait in some dinghy waiting room. Why, he asked himself, why did she get shot? He would gladly take a bullet for her after what she had told him. and who shot her? When he found out, he would kill them. They had taken his Crystal away from him. They took away his baby.



Find out if Crystal survives this bullet, or if it's the end of the line for her, next week.

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